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taytay06
shaunte pasley
United States, illinois, chicago

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TICK TOCK

The clock goes tick

The clock goes tock

Where will the wind blow when the clock goes stop?

Time will not wait

To hear advanced criticism

Egotistical ignorance

Is what killed em

 

The tap tap of the tapping tapsters were the

Click click of the clicking laughers

 

Life ran wildly untamed,

But life was trained by the tamed

Roaring its self free

The sun is the son

The sea is to see

 

Whoosh! ! !

The waves are detected to detect the reflection

Of the relaxation relaxing in the shade

After the shade:

Decays

Replays

Relays

Then it's remade to repeat in a cycle of all cycles

Chaos is life's best friend

Who will lend the wind its skin?

 

Render not to the storm,

But the storm renders

 

Render not to the earth, but

The earth renders its intensions

To deceive a nation, Based upon racism

 

The time has passed . . .

The wind has lost . . .

Waited to late

So many fought

 

The clock goes tick

The clock goes tock

Where will the wind blow when the clock goes stop?

 

 

 


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Lichtentunes Comment by: Lichtentunes - 2007-12-13 08:07
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I thoroughly enjoyed the wordplay. It`S not that often I come across someone who seems to have so much fun with words. Inspiring!
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-02-22 16:49
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This really good with an easy-to-read rythme. The imagery is great.
jreamwriter Comment by: jreamwriter - 2007-01-12 22:47
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nicely done
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2006-08-01 06:17
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This one rolls off the tounge with twisted words and a strong message. Very good.
The Great One 99 Comment by: The Great One 99 - 2006-07-31 20:04
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great poem i love it it has a smooth rythm and dont listen to ray07 she doesnt know wat poetry is im sure her poems arent that great either
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