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Inferno
Fernando Sillas
United States

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Sandscript

Old, old, old aren't we all.
Afraid of help.Overcoming, retreating, dieing, and all the while filling our glasses with the same drink.

 I forget myself.I forget  that I had to get use to myself and the world tends to deal with me a different way than I deal with myself.

 But the world also forgets itself. It's had so much time to come into it's own
And we only get a life time'¦'¦.if that.  

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bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-05-05 04:45
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Very well put...I'd like to say something other than what's already been said, but it's true-- the last line is fab.
poety55 Comment by: poety55 - 2006-05-04 19:37
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Love the last couple of sentences.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-05-04 14:34
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Killer last line.
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