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The Creative Interpreter to the Rhythm of your Love
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I like how you are consistent with the idea of how one thing is at the whim of another. You made it simple and easy to understand--by the second line I know where you're going with it.
Again, very creative and so much said in few words. You tell a wonderful love story here full of passion. I love the interaction of words like moon and ocean. Each line is beautiful.
Oh My..i think i want to be in love again, after reading that! ..i especially like the line...The Creative Interpreter to the Rhythm of your Love...I look forward to reading more of your work...
Lovely metaphors. Gorgeous in its brevity, this poem completely captures that sense of being entirely under the sway of another's personality, but of there being nowhere else you'd rather be.
