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SMILE

ALL LIKE ME !

ALL EXPECT MY PRESENCE FROM EVERYONE !

ALL ARE HAPPY TO EXPRESS THEMSEVES THROUGH ME !

KID TO OLD, ALL BECOME BEAUTIFUL WITH ME !

I AM THE REAL HEART !

I AM THE REAL LOVE !

I AM THE REAL WORLD !

I WANT TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER !

BUT YOU SHOULD MAKE YOURSELF SO STRONG

THAT YOU CAN CARRY ME FOR EVERYBODY !

I AM SMILE. THE GREATEST WEALTH OF THE WORLD ! 


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manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-10-21 20:38
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lovely poem indeed.
cheers!
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-05-05 10:19
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Get rid of the capitals...it's not easy on the eyes and makes the reader wince as do the exclamation marks. You make it sound a happy string of shouts though.
lasttoknow Comment by: lasttoknow - 2006-05-05 09:42
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wow. that's all i have to say/
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