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Joni Ramos
Joni Ramos
Philippines, Manila

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Touch Your Heart

 

 

feeling, sensing, teasing

wilderness

unfettered by rules,

untouched by noise

 

touch your heart

silently depart

introduce your mind

 

embrace your being

look, see beyond..

a dream

navigating

 

surround this evergreen

with echoe's of bliss

cradle warmth of love's

embrace

splendor in all it's madness

 

hold a rose

a budding thorn

 

digest existence

publish laughter

 

squint no more

blurry visions of past

tease a spectacle

 

days no longer unaware

night savoured into an evening

 

romance rekindled

love necessary

 

happiness no longer stifled

in the palm of your hand

slowly

grasp the moment

before the setting

sun

 


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Comment by: - 2006-05-06 18:52
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the imagery here is wonderful. beautiful words, all over. nice poem.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-05-06 06:40
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'digest existence / publish laughter' - great lines and great rules to live by.
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-05-05 23:00
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'introduce your mind'..to what?
Some excellent phrases, but needs some work.
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