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... visit comes ...
before you discard
get undressed
before you open your mouth
kiss me
Before you take a seat,
take me
before you grasp meal,
touch me
before you lap wine,
taste of my juice
if you already come,
let yourself go ...
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| All of your poems are so sensual. i think that it is a beautiful topic to write about can never stop being described. you've done it well |
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| sweet, sensuous and loving...I loved the way you wrote it, simple words, simple pleasures, things we enjoy. I loved the ending, "let yourself go" just like that, very nice :) Robert |
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| Nice style with a nice easy laid back flow. Very sensuous write here. |
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| Really enjoyed reading this. Like the style and flow of your writing. |
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