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Let me go on the trip
Explore your face
With my fingertips
With my hand
With my lips
Let me go on the trip
Discover your chest
With tender stroking
With soft kisses
With loving touching
Let me go on the trip
With all senses
See you
Smell you
Taste you
Hear you
Let me go on the trip
Together with you
You at me
You in me
You with me
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This poem is intense, leaving me speechless. I want to go on the trip now, the way you wrote it was perfect, simple and loving. I loved how it made me feel inside...it seemed to bring a feeling of perfection. Great job
