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SpadedHeart
K SpadedHeart
United States, Texas, Fort Worth

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Slipping Away

Slipping Away

What are
you searching for?
Tell me
What is it
that you want to seeeeeeeeee
aaaaaa aaaa oooo
Do you
want to part the sea in me?
Can I
remove that obstacle in
your eye?
Put your
hand on my heart
feel it
It's a (breaking) beat of a heart
Beating
for you
But you,
You're going to fly
Maybe then
you can
seeeeeeeeeee
through these life's
mysteries
You are
walking over water
but I
am holding you up
while you cross.
Without
you
there is no
us.

Oh god
I feel you
slipping away

please don't
please don't
go away
It is
only you that I beg
let me at least say
good bye
face to face
I have a vision of your water
turning to divine
How do
I resurrect
a miracle
without you
and
I will return
to being
blind

Oh god
I feel you
slipping away

What is a greater miracle?
than your life?
I had
to come back twice
in this
life
what else can I do
I am nothing
without you

Oh god
I feel you
slipping away

Hang on
Hang on
I see an angel
in the sky.
It's here I
that I will know
if we
say hello
or goodbye,
but love..
Love
never
never dies.
Oh God
there are
rivers in my eyes

K

Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved.

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lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-08 01:42
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really dont know what to write...wonderful,beautiful, are not enough.
gobsmacked.
kyrasdaddy Comment by: kyrasdaddy - 2006-05-07 18:26
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its so sad. but the lyrics are so touching, and the wants are so real, its hard to not read, to not feel your heart. nice writing.
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-05-07 11:56
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A very aural piece which needs to be heard and read at the same time. I love the slongation of some of your words to sustain the beat of each of the alloted bars of melody of this song. A subtle tinge of sadness married with reflection. Beautiful.
Comment by: - 2006-05-06 19:01
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i'd like to hear this with music.
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-05-06 15:19
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db...

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=)

its truly beautiful....alive somehow...so so beautiful
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