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Ray07
Ray Rogers
United States, indiana, lafayette

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My reasons

For these are my reasons my heart is so tender
And for these are my reasons why my heart can't deliver
I have not yet to find what i want and still the search is on
I've been searching my whole life
So why should i have to search more
Have i played myself or has life played me
When your vision is blurry and sometime you can't see
You want to ask Ray Charles how is he blind and saw life so clearly
Sometime their are things you can't understand
And other times their are things you demand
I want my answer
I want to be heard
Just tell me now have my life been plan
If so lets change the rules so i can plan my path and predict me future
Maybe then i'll be able to choose
If my life has been chosen for me was it made for suffering
Suffering from love and insecurity
If i started to question is i'm questioning my destiny
See i'm full of all thoughts but low on my words
Could it be because my future is something i can't hold
When I try to reach out my hands go straight through
When i open up my eyes i see everything if front of you
But just not my answer only my reasons why i can
Love you

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xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-14 00:16
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I like this. I like the rhyme scheme, you just have a few grammatical errors though, still lovely piece.
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-05 10:49
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haha i liked the poem, your comments are funny.. ~ Sarah
Baxter Comment by: Baxter - 2006-07-06 08:08
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I like your style - This speaks to all of us who are jaded by the past and unsure if we will ever bounce back. A good read!
Ray07 Comment by: Ray07 - 2006-05-08 14:21
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whatever, i have a reason why i'm going to whip ur ass punk!
taytay06 Comment by: taytay06 - 2006-05-08 08:53
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u aint got no damn reasons
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