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smalltownpoet
mackenzie schmitt
United States, Oregon, Forest Grove

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so much of you

lucid. you never are.
you're changing irrational
confused and confusing
loved and a lover

so many things wrapped into one
you are the most everything
i've ever known

changing and reversing
to things are more unclear
than they ever were clear
i never wanted you to change

you're enthralling and disenchanting
you're wise and as unassuming as a child
innocent as a lamb
and as conniving as the devil
you're amazing and dissapointing

so much of you enthralls me
so much of you excites me
so much of you invites me


so much of everything i want
and so much of everything i've got
so much of you i still don't understand
so much of you i want to know and discover
so much of you i'll never get to learn

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Comment by: - 2007-02-08 09:53
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i love how this flows so well without punctuation. punctuation always throws me. emotions are well described here. nice work.
Comment by: - 2006-09-22 08:05
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aw.... this is really good.... did someone leave you? that is what I get from this! This is wonderful I really liked it!!! great job!!!

~Princess Padge
marinesdaughter Comment by: marinesdaughter - 2006-07-06 12:11
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I do agree about the 3rd stanza, but I like how you are riding this roller coaster of emotions with this love. I like the feelings it envokes, confusion, but also, almost a compulsive excitement, sparked by their presence. I enjoyed this one!!!!
endlessone Comment by: endlessone - 2006-06-26 01:29
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very nice poems... kinda foreshadows the deception in the end too. Any prefered poets?
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-05-18 10:24
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great. the first flush of love in a relationship. really well written. liking your work mackenzie
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