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Comment by: - 2007-02-08 09:53
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| i love how this flows so well without punctuation. punctuation always throws me. emotions are well described here. nice work. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-22 08:05
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aw.... this is really good.... did someone leave you? that is what I get from this! This is wonderful I really liked it!!! great job!!!
~Princess Padge |
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| I do agree about the 3rd stanza, but I like how you are riding this roller coaster of emotions with this love. I like the feelings it envokes, confusion, but also, almost a compulsive excitement, sparked by their presence. I enjoyed this one!!!! |
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| very nice poems... kinda foreshadows the deception in the end too. Any prefered poets? |
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| great. the first flush of love in a relationship. really well written. liking your work mackenzie |
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