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let it simply happen
why defend yourself against it
we are like two magnets
that pull closer to each other
let it simply happen
let us make love
not think about what could happen
instead let us enjoy
just allow it
that our fantasies, our senses
become independent
and the desire brings us together
allow it
that sweat bodies are rolling
that fingernails bury themselves into skin
that lust takes what it needs
that we take what we want
but do not allow
that your feelings take over
that it is more than just a little bit 'in love'
that is the danger
or is it already too late?!
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Yes, just give in. Is he there in the morning? Does he call you. It is hard not to want those things after you have given your body to someone. You have to trick you own mind.
Another good poem. This one is sensually wonderful. There's a playfulness about it that isn't urgent at all. Just a "Let it happen" kind of attitude. To let the fingers, the touches, kisses...just let your whole body do the talking, not your mouth. I loved this!
"allow it
that sweat bodies are rolling
that fingernails (burry) themselves into skin (bury)?
that lust takes what it needs
that we take what we want" I really liked that stanza, in fact I loved this whole poem.
