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| Of the ones I've read from you, this one shines in it's simplicity, while speaking volumes...especially liked the ending line. Very strong and much enjoyed poem you have here. |
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| I love it. To see something better through the darkness. Simple and yet so bold. Brilliant. :) |
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Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-05-30 23:21
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| This is so simple, but I see the deeper meaning of hope. I like it. |
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| Ah, but I would like to know more! You're given us a metaphor, but you haven't placed it in any context- what was the grey? What bought on this epiphany? How was this way different that before? You hint at all of this, but it would be a stronger piece if you allowed the reader a little more insight. |
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