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Poetica
Michelle Richardson
United States, MA, Boston

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Disclosure - Part 2 of 3

I hear your voice and I hear your thoughts
and I can't do anything but want
To know what it would feel like
to feel your hands

Mmmm to take that adventure...
oh it would be brave
I wonder would you indenture...
the servant of my soul
and make it your slave

When all it wants is to walk freely along
the paths set in your heart
and dance to your beat...
I wanna know how it would feel
to allow my body to cool your heat
To turn that desire into fire
and turn you into my phoenix
to have burn inside me
till you turn to ashes and die in my arms
so that I can kiss you
and whisper that I love you in your ear
and feel your body as it warms...
to bring you back to me

Close your eyes and tell me you can see
farther than forever
and that you can see it with me

I'm not the average girl in your video
I'm just a woman looking for someone to
love endlessly...with whom I can grow

My heart is still fragile
from its last break
So if you even consider this chance to take

Know that I'm worthy of truth and continuity
Honesty not charity

Oh I have needs

But I've accustomed myself
to the solitude climate
Not too hot not too cold'¦
My body is in a zone that is temperate

I'm lonely not desperate

But perhaps due to my needs I find myself
becoming easy prey
To those fiends out there
that seek out a quick lay

I just pray

That if you EVER touch me
Its only because you can truly see

Que soy de carne y hueso y por eso
Vivo para morir...lloro por no poder reir
Y voy a sentir
Cualquier paso que tu des en mi
No me hagas sufrir

Tengo hambre
Pero no pongas a mi alcanzer
El plato suculento que apparenta ser'¦lo que tu me ofreces
Soy una mujer que no merece
Que le hagan un daño
Y si lo sufro que no sea de tu mano
Y si me quieres ven...te espero temprano

Sooner than later
And it may be then that maybe
By making sweet love to me

You'll bring me back to life
No drama...no strife

I just wanna be your lady
and not only for one night

Please don't make a wrong out of this right

If you can't stay true to the hopes that lie within me
Then let me continue to make love to your mind and not ever your body




Copyright © 2005




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brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-04-18 11:03
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If you can't stay true to the hopes that lie within me
Then let me continue to make love to your mind and not ever your body

Loved it. I think the above is your best line; so profound.
kms Comment by: kms - 2007-11-03 09:53
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i thought this was kind of hard to read because there was no punctuation. i liked it and i think that will make it better. jmo
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-07-16 08:26
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"Que soy de carne y hueso y por eso
Vivo para morir...lloro por no poder reir
Y voy a sentir
Cualquier paso que tu des en mi
No me hagas sufrir " -- i knew i shouldn't have dropped out of spanish class :(

This piece over all is very lyrical and lovely. it has a beautiful flow and rhythm.thanks for the read.
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