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| Nicely written poem. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Vibrant work. I liked the line in the 6th stanza. "Throw away the black ink"
I would drop all the "that"s in the 2nd stanza.
Well done. |
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| Oh My God! I love this too! |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-19 09:56
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a beautiful peice of awesome mackenzie work amazing stanzas it just flows together for me i right some poems of my own and your very good i would be honered for you to comment on some of mine if you wish
once again awesome work kep up the good work |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-06-02 05:21
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| love this all too much to pick out a favorite line or stanza..fantastic work. |
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