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Comment by: - 2006-05-13 07:00
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| Really enjoyable descriptions. Smells sounds and visions of summer painted well here, I love the bees chasing you last year. Well written, no wasted words at all. Enjoyed it. |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-12 12:19
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| The everyday epiphanies-you can turn the small and local into the universal. |
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| You have a great gift of bringing the reader straight into the writing, Judy. There's a lovely flow throughout the lines. Enjoyed this. |
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| I like how you take everyday things and compose them into poems. You often write about things I never give a second thought making me stand still and re-evaluate it's significance. I personally love the smell of freshly cut grass and enjoyed this poem a great deal. Interesting combination of words you use here, quite effective. |
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Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-05-09 10:41
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| This is great. You have the description, which everyone can identify with, and make it lyrical. I can hear the lawn mower through your words. |
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