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Whats on your mind?
What are you thinking about in the early morning light?
I often wonder where you go, as a mystical peace overcomes
the being next to me.
I only wish this wonderful calming, could stay with you
for always.
The breeze flowing freely, in the morning dawn.
Smelling sweetly the waking fragrance of the new day.
I am the lucky one, today I share this brand new morning
with you.
I would like to stay in this heavenly moment for just a
while longer.
One last deep breath.
What a lovely moment we had shared.
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-07-26 16:54
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| Just realized I commented on the same poem twice. Oh well, twice the love. |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-07-26 16:48
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| Sweet moment. You have caught one of those times where time stands still and yet you can still feel it waiting at the door. Nicely done. |
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| nice. |
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there seems to be so much more to this poem. A great love, yes, a mothers love for a sickly child, maybe.
It is a sweet and loving piece of privacy and I thank you for sharing it
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-05-11 11:42
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| I think you capture the bitter sweetness of the great moments. Wanting to hold onto them...don't we all. |
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