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KnightPale
Arkady Gurovich
United States, California, West Hollywood

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WHISPER OF SNOW

You think
I'm absent?
Silent,
I fly by,
Touching your hair
Then
In a minute
Melting.
Come to the study,
Here,
My dear,
I'm dwelt in,
Writing to you,
Sweet apple of my eye.

A gift of inspiration,
On your desk,
There lies the page,
A lately written poem.
Look into it,
And you will see the proem
Of my commitment,
Warm and chivalresque.
Come to the kitchen.
Thirsty?
Take a glass
And you will find me
On the very bottom,
Moving so gladly
To the ripened autumn
Of your beloved lips,
My tender lass.

You take a sip of me
And just allow -
Of any other things -
To be your absinth.
So why d'you say
Of me that I am absent,
If you're absorbing me?
You do it now.

I'm snow?
No,
Ice with hard belief in dreams,
A brother of the ice in any freezer.
Your silver fork
Picks on me,
A sweet teaser
Ready to melt,
Becoming your white cream.

My dream caresses you
To feel and know,
Adoring verses forming a mosaic...
Forget about routine,
Mundane,
Prosaic...
Though sad
I'm glad
To be your whisp'ring snow.

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KnightPale Comment by: KnightPale - 2007-06-24 06:28
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Thank you, yoroki.
Comment by: - 2007-06-24 00:25
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^^ your poems are great in structure and in beauty detail is never a problem and i hope you continue to write
KnightPale Comment by: KnightPale - 2007-06-14 07:45
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Thank you, dear... (have no valiance to say your name):)
I think it is due to presence of rhythm and rhyming, though specific images are more important in poetry.
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2007-06-13 21:48
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I read your poem. Then I thought. I read it again, and I listened. (Each word spoke.) I read it yet again, and I absorbed. After the fourth reading I concluded I wish I had written it myself.
"Whisper of Snow" is deep, stirring, and lovely.
KnightPale Comment by: KnightPale - 2007-03-20 19:44
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Thank you, Roy, for your high pricing of my work.
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