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desire it is. this piece of work is so breathless and steamy while still being open for every one to read. a great example of saucy and passionate without being explicit.
My only criticism would be that the word burns appears too often - needs another way to suggest it.
Apart from that - great! |
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Comment by: Afrka - 2007-12-01 15:11
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| Powerful. Very sensual and vivid! Thanks for sharing! |
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| feeling & appreciating the passion |
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| i will definetely be watching out for your works! |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-04-29 15:31
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| Woman you sure are hot.. hehe.. Great piece, no pun intended. If hot is the intended effect you are fantastic. Well written |
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"Blue Water Baptism"
"Blue Water Baptism" is my second collection of poems ranging in topic from views on death, God, friendships, and society. These poems were written in the course of ten years and show the "20-something" state of mind that transitions into a "30-something" mentality.
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