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Avi
Abraham Kegel
United States, NY, Flushing

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A flowery gift'¦

Your smile is intoxicating

Like a flower blooming right before my very eyes

Your glowing face, gives me the shivers and the thrills

Your beating heart against mine is like fuel for my thoughts.

Your warm hands caressing mine are like sugar in my soft drink

Your warm soft lips on mine are like medicine for my soul

Your whispers in my ear are like the smell of roses to my nose

Your words of wisdom are like poetry for me to sing





Oh yes my love you're special indeed,

A gift unwrapped for me to enjoy

A gift I hope would last longer then I live

And for that my love, I'll always be grateful

As long as I can breath





So please my love don't ever change, please don't

And stay the blooming flower that you are, oh please.

Oh, and I, I'll thank God for this wonderful flowery gift

That I've received.

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flowingink0816 Comment by: flowingink0816 - 2006-05-15 16:40
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i think you forgot to change what type of writing this was. still, it's a very good piece of work.
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