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flowingink0816
Sean Morrison
United States, Illinois

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Cracks

Oh the pressure is building,
the mountains are moving,
the tides are collapsing-ALL_ON_ME.

I feel weight resting,
just between my shoulders,
the weight of the world is-ALL_ON_ME.

And I am not complaining,
I'm really just venting,
It's just a step back to-reA_LI_TY.

I'm mending the cracks and,
I'm trying to relax and,
I'm trying to release so I can JUST_BE_ME.

So just for a while,
just a little while,
sit back and cool down and-LET_ME_BE.

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chillibeani826 Comment by: chillibeani826 - 2008-01-13 08:34
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Interesting read:)
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2006-06-06 18:33
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A very cool poem. I found myself singing along with the rhythm.
I love it!!!!!
jadefahy81 Comment by: jadefahy81 - 2006-05-25 19:01
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wow, girly! this is awesome, its nice to see a writer thats close to the same age as moi! keep it up, i love your schtuff! poems are a very good way to express yourself!
luvluv
kassi
Comment by: - 2006-05-17 20:25
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It could be a song. I like the rythm of the words very simple but also very effective. good work!
Comment by: - 2006-05-17 16:54
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I feel that way sometimes. Beautiful way to express yourself.
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