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Music= Life
Nervously
I move to the front
Holding my love's hand
Making him follow
I look around
All I see is people
All different
Yet here for the same reason I am
Dark, yet there is light
I can hear voices
Picking up conversations here and there
'I can't wait!'
'What's taking so long?'
'I didn't pay for this!'
Total darkness
Screams in the background
But not scared screams
Excited screams
Strumming of a guitar from the speakers
I think 'I love this song!' simultaneously with the others
Thrilled murmurs and shouts
Coloured lights flash around the room
Like fireflies on a hot summer day
Butterflies are in my stomach
As I dance and sing along
To the familiar tunes
I look over
Seeing that my love is doing the same
But not only him
But everyone around us
Could any of us ever live with out music?
With out the joy
The excitement
The closeness
it brings?
No
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Comment by: mitra - 2006-08-11 05:11
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Narrated very well. Felt at times it was leading to other places but you cleverly bring your audience back to the message. Lovely .. Lovely write!
without music?? no way!! ;) |
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Comment by: Idainne - 2006-07-16 03:38
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Hark, I know this well. the situation that is, goin to a gig. you've described it all so well it takes me back to my memories of those times, an outstanding piece of descriptive poetry, Well done.
Congrats xXx |
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| nice image... |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-27 23:43
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well, girl what can I say? you are one talented kid! you keep this up, you're going to be famous one day. And NO, I am not being biased!
I can't wait to read more of your creations. |
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