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FLIGHT 8803: Last Log
BEGIN TRANSMISSION . . .
The plane is about to crash, a nosedive into oblivion.
Out of existence leaving nothing behind but wreckage
You have front row tickets to a tragedy.
IMPACT IN 5
Something went wrong, you don't know what.
Who's supposed to take care of these things?
Well He's a killer now. You're the victim.
IMPACT IN 4
You're not ready to die, you want to live.
There must be something to redeem you with.
But of course it's too late for that now.
IMPACT IN 3
You weep for the ones you leave behind,
Wish them well, but for you it's ended.
Turn off the lights, let's go home.
IMPACT IN 2
Relax, embrace the impact.
You didn't buy the ticket, but the ride is over.
Close your eyes. This won't hurt.
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. . . END OF TRANSMISSION
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Comment by: dlynn - 2007-09-24 19:09
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| I went down with the plane. Gave me chills. Very very good read. |
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Comment by: jesscat - 2007-05-26 17:28
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The whole idea and style of the thing is ingenious to me. What I think is so cool about it is that has a lot of power, especially if you put it in some sort of context, you know what I mean?
You can totally change the meaning or type of power it has just by pairing it with other peices, or even art or music. very cool |
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| i want your writing in my e zine. www.myspace.com/critizineum, email me at natalie.bell.fern@gmail.com for further information |
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| Every time i read the 'IMPACT IN', my stomach nose dived with the plane. Nice work. |
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| This was a very intense, stomach churning read. Nice job. |
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