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SpadedHeart
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United States, Texas, Fort Worth

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Family Poetry -Lucille Patrick -Heavens Shore

Think of Stepping on Heavens Shore

And Finding It

....Heaven

Of taking Hold of a Hand

And Finding It

....Gods Hand

Of Breathing a New Air

And Finding it

.....Celestial Air Of Feeling Invigorated

And Finding It

....Immortality

Of passing from Storm And Tempest to an Unknown Calm

Of Waking and finding it

Home ! .... Thats Heavens Shore... By Lucille Parick

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frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-04-28 12:08
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oh my goodness, I love the image that I got when I read 'heaven's shore.' The beach is pretty much my favorite place, so if everyone has a different kind of heaven, i think mine would be very similar to a beach.. well done.
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-15 01:45
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wonderful piece again...says it all.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-05-14 10:57
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And Finding It

....Heaven

Of taking Hold of a Hand

And Finding It

....Gods Hand

Of Breathing a New Air

And Finding it "

I like the stanza set up and flow, its kind of twitchy, but very elegant. nice write!
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