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Comment by: mitra - 2006-10-23 02:54
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| The setiment of "wanting to do better" in this poems speaks volumes. Somehow past mistakes doesnt matter anymore. |
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Lovely flow to this poem, smooth and steady, rhyming effortlessly and even managing a couple of real honest moments of introspection.
Just goes to show that sometimes the deepest feelings are best expressed in the simplest of ways. |
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| I love this reminds me of the style of Whiltman...very classically exposed and full of hopeful loving sentiment. |
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| I agree with Leah, your style is very lyrical |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-15 19:24
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| I like the rhyme in this...very lyrical as well as the other poem of yours I read...I likeyour style. _ Leah |
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