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mojoroma24
Trent Amor
Australia

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flower

I once held a beautiful flower
and in my hand the flower bloomed
but my soul was bitter and sour
and in my hand the flower was doomed

And even though this flower was lifted
into the sunshine of my mind
still in my hand the flower wilted
now all thats left i'll die to find

I would write a song for you
with every verse a mile long
and every word absolutely true
still in your mind
you find them wrong

And for you i could write a book
filled with love i'd write it every day
make you happy no matter what it took
despite what you think love will find a way.

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-10-23 02:54
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The setiment of "wanting to do better" in this poems speaks volumes. Somehow past mistakes doesnt matter anymore.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-08-17 22:30
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Lovely flow to this poem, smooth and steady, rhyming effortlessly and even managing a couple of real honest moments of introspection.
Just goes to show that sometimes the deepest feelings are best expressed in the simplest of ways.
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-08-17 16:24
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I love this reminds me of the style of Whiltman...very classically exposed and full of hopeful loving sentiment.
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-05-18 09:14
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I agree with Leah, your style is very lyrical
Comment by: - 2006-05-15 19:24
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I like the rhyme in this...very lyrical as well as the other poem of yours I read...I likeyour style. _ Leah
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