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barking mad
Richard Unwin
United Kingdom, Manchester

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The Solitary Elm

It has been another year,
and you, sir, are still here
guarding your own plot of eternity,
a solitary elm, outcast beneath the sky.
Here is a focal point, dreaming in fields -
so many years, rooted to one spot,
waiting with indifferent measure
in anticipation of love, or dread of death.
There is danger here;
ready to drop a branch on a sudden whim,
shedding a limb as easily as a snake sloughs its skin
or as the salamander, trapped in fire, loses a tail.

And, too, the old familiars are here
arranging themselves around the bed.
A moon, solemn-faced as she has always been
brooding over lost loves and hopes;
a sun, smiling and golden, a reminder
of that which was green, of the sea, hills and fields;
corn, waving deeply, beckoning forever onward
toward paths that were never trod,
snow-capped peaks that were never reached.
And in the corner of this field, the sentinel elm
is musing upon another life that,
being part of the same dream,
has spent some time within its shade.
There is no need for further telling:
the careless, whispering leaves of the elm speak of everything.

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Comment by: - 2007-01-21 20:40
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Wonderful poem. The descriptions are incredible. The words seem to tie together perfectly. Excellent job.
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2006-09-21 17:18
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Beautiful metaphors and personifications. You've written a wonderful piece of poetry here. Every line is special, not just one particular one. I do so enjoy your work.
clockworkjuice Comment by: clockworkjuice - 2006-08-07 11:13
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Your wordsmithing has brought reverence for nature in view for all of us. You must truly love nature and all the majesty that often surrounds us, especially if we look very closely. The circle of life is well represented here. Thanks for sharing it!
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-06-22 14:03
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So few old elms are left. Works well as a metaphor for age. Who was the other life in it's shade I wonder? Are you reminiscing here? Flows well.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-02 19:30
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It is as if the elders speak to the young ones. Who would tell the earth tales if not the trees.
very nice
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