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Comment by: - 2006-06-04 18:23
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| I just had to revisit this poem. It is one of my favorites. I think this poem put you on the map for all the women of SI. |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-05-26 15:27
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| I enjoyed this poem. Great writing. Keep up the good work. You do have a gift. |
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| nice one bud. top notch as always |
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| This poem is an invitation to the subject. (or that's how it reads to me.) I like the way you've left the emotive words on lines of their own - it gives them more weight in the piece. |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-05-22 16:26
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| Hi, David - I'm with Colin on this. "I could shake your world with just one finger." Powerful phrasing. (won't - pleasure's) Unless you're going for something else. Good work as always. :) |
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