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audreymei
audrey mei
Germany, Berlin

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Machine

That hollow rattling noise
Is another someone's dream
Exhausted wires are ticking
a harmful deafening threat
and electric pupils stare
blank at the painted wall.
I can't listen to this grinding sound anymore,
the chain hissing between my ankles.

Because nobody ever stopped time before
Quite like you did.
Me in your arms,
in a golden valley where
a huge pumping heart swept the
grass in a breeze.

One morning it had disappeared
the scintillating screech of steel
and the bloody mist of all
victims' desires.
Don't send me back there,
I will have to swallow for Eternity
the hard and heavy bullets
of another someone's plans...
rescue me.

'If you do not love,' they said,
'it cannot slip away...'

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suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-05-21 11:54
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I like your metaphors.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-05-21 07:14
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All I can say to this is, well written, and your message is oh so true. On the other hand, if you had never opened yourself to love, then you would have missed the dance, and you would have been made less for the loss.
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