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star gazer
clare williams
United Kingdom, Worcestershire

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My Reality

I came undone,
You fell apart,
Yet still in your hands you hold my heart,
My days are getting longer,
My time is running out,
I can feel myself inside you,filling you with doubt,
Your breaking my heart slowly,I lose a piece every day,
I join the crowd,I laugh out loud,to make believe that Im okay,
But behind this crooked smile is my raw,bare heart,
Beating only because it must,I got eaten alive by you,like a fish to a shark,
My mind works in solitude,maybe now your noise will finally stop,
Cast aside many times,but now I can see its not my loss.

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RyanWHarris Comment by: RyanWHarris - 2008-06-26 00:49
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Very sad and empty,great work!, the formatting is a nightmare on here...lol
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