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poety55
Caroline Bennett
United States

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Move On

Your words,
They never spoke so clear to me.
They never worked that way.
Your words,
They never meant so little to me.
They meant nothing on that day.

I thought that we could work this out.
You said we were friends forever.
But I think what you meant to say
Is that we were friends
For never.

Now I'll say goodbye to memories.
I've put up with this too long.
I think it's time we all grew up.
Let's grow up,
And just move on.

So this is where our story ends?
You said you'd always be there.
But I guess I knew it all along;
I knew you didn't care.

Let's say goodbye to all our dreams.
It's time now
For a brand new start.
But did you know it all along?
Cause I felt it in my heart.

Now I'm trying so damn hard
Just to let this go.
But how does one say goodbye
To the only thing they know?

So why won't you just say goodbye?
Cause I have said so long.
And why can't you just let it go?
I think it's time that you move on.

And so what if I am different?
That doesn't make me wrong.
It think it's time that you grew up
And learn
To just
Move On.

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DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2007-02-16 16:35
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... i have a complex now.
NicFran Comment by: NicFran - 2007-02-05 10:53
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I too liked the way your stanza's were formulated!
Nice job!!!
Elinki Comment by: Elinki - 2007-01-14 21:41
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this has a somber meter to it which deffinently enhances the emotions embedded in this, and its a topic I think alot can relate to; myself included.

real horrorshow write. keep it up
Vinney2345 Comment by: Vinney2345 - 2006-06-07 15:09
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Its always hard letting go...stirring some emotions here. good work. keep it up
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-05-26 22:47
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This brought back some memories.
Your writing is stronger everytime. Keep up the good work.
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