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Chili Dog
Ron Hulshizer II
United States, Nebraska, Lincoln

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Redeye Mass

A novocaine rush from the Devil's vein
Stirs an exodus for hedonistic plunder.
Morality gives way to the malevolence within.
Atop a venomous wing, I descend upon her,
Eclipsing her angelic eyes and jasmine nose.

Divine words from an ambrosian tongue
Placate my afflicted, blackened soul.
Suppression is cast aside for indulgence.
With a ravenous abandon, she consumes my flesh,
Charioting me to inevitable apacolypse.

An unholy phoenix, reborn yet again
Cursed to rise from the pestilent ashes.
Gratification rendered from a blitzkrieg mentality.
In the length of an enchanted whisper,
I become the living onyx that mimics the light.

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soloIQ Comment by: soloIQ - 2006-06-30 11:18
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Your too good....so you know.
stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2006-06-28 06:53
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My favorite part is the last 3 words. Great imagery. Why is it called Redeye Mass?
Comment by: - 2006-06-27 21:25
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Lovely, compelling, and too little words to describe this
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-06-13 12:41
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"Charioting me" was my favorite part.
lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-05-28 02:49
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A novocaine rush from the Devil's vein
Stirs an exodus for hedonistic plunder
really great opening, to a really great poem..
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