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Let me know what you see
Let me know how we be
Let me know how you feel
So we may talk and appeal
Discuss and make our seal
Tell me if I go too fast
Tell me if I remind you of the past
Im sorry if It's too much
I know you're my crutch
My apologizes for love,
You're so beautiful to me
This I've learned to see
But please don't rush your heart
I know it's fast and I know it's hard
I know he can't be there like I can
I want to be there all the time
To help you through all the tough times
To influence all the writes and all the rhymes
Don't rush love do what you need
I'll be here when its time to take heed
I'm here for forever love
I'm here for you to see
Please make us be
Forever
Just You
and me
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Wow.. all the rhymes are a bit distracting, but otherwise, the words are lovely. I really like the thought behind the words and this poem must be for someone very special.
