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magnificentabu
Claire James
United States, Missouri, O'Fallon

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Laughing in circles

Lips parting only for
expected lines.
Never for that passionate
intimacy.

My feet bare beside your
protection.
I ran ahead to
pretend you weren't my
Core.

In between the lyrics
of our favorite songs,
is me: begging
for a stripping
of skins.

The exterior of me refuses to
sink to my knees.
The interior of me refuses to
stand emotionless.

I know the suns
of the water
reflect the truth.

This is another
contradiction of nature
like the leaves meeting earth
only when dead.

I brush you out
of my strands,
while water cleanses you
from my cells.

I inhale the whispered words
of the wind
so they will

never reach you.

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SunShinee7 Comment by: SunShinee7 - 2008-03-09 09:37
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I like how it has such a sweet romantic twist to it. Very good.
meatloaf Comment by: meatloaf - 2006-12-24 08:35
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This is another
contradiction of nature
like the leaves meeting earth
only when dead.

-hate to repeat it. But this strucked me hard as well. Makes me feel the sadness of never having or achieving things you wanted. It transfer the strong feeling of despair and longing and want. And hell I wanted to punch on something.

I inhale the whispered words
of the wind
so they will

never reach you.

-nothing more is painful than love not expressed. than love so supressed. you are indeed a master of representing and relating things of your feelings. I love it
JMonroe Comment by: JMonroe - 2006-12-12 14:34
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I know the suns
of the water
reflect the truth.

Love this line! Powerful imagery and reads very well aloud. Well done!
dicomposition Comment by: dicomposition - 2006-10-21 05:43
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This is another
contradiction of nature
like the leaves meeting earth
only when dead.

this is more than amazing.this is extremely a piece of art, just that idea about nature.wow
stopxlightxgreen Comment by: stopxlightxgreen - 2006-07-10 08:52
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This poem reminds me of what it's like to love somebody at a distance.

I agree with normal jeane's favorite part... that stanza is great.
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