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| I like how it has such a sweet romantic twist to it. Very good. |
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This is another
contradiction of nature
like the leaves meeting earth
only when dead.
-hate to repeat it. But this strucked me hard as well. Makes me feel the sadness of never having or achieving things you wanted. It transfer the strong feeling of despair and longing and want. And hell I wanted to punch on something.
I inhale the whispered words
of the wind
so they will
never reach you.
-nothing more is painful than love not expressed. than love so supressed. you are indeed a master of representing and relating things of your feelings. I love it |
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Comment by: JMonroe - 2006-12-12 14:34
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I know the suns
of the water
reflect the truth.
Love this line! Powerful imagery and reads very well aloud. Well done! |
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This is another
contradiction of nature
like the leaves meeting earth
only when dead.
this is more than amazing.this is extremely a piece of art, just that idea about nature.wow |
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This poem reminds me of what it's like to love somebody at a distance.
I agree with normal jeane's favorite part... that stanza is great. |
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