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skylight
skylight
Australia, WA, Perth

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A Lawyer Trying To Say "I Love You."

The first party wishes for the second party
to acknowledge the first party's emotional state
and merge together a relationship
that will increase the chances of human intimacy
in a contract of confidentiality.

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paradoxpen Comment by: paradoxpen - 2006-12-12 06:57
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Very funny idea, I love it
Giligadi Comment by: Giligadi - 2006-08-19 22:24
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I'm pretty sure that this is, at best, a poem. I'm sorry. I'm just tired of clicking on 'short story' and getting five lines and 33 words.
I like the idea, although (and i know, i know.. there's nothing new under the sun) i'm pretty sure that i've seen it explored in similar fashion elsewhere.
don't quote me on that, though. Because i'd have to contact my lawyers.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-06-08 07:25
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Fab. Worked in the legal profession for a while (quite glad to say I hated it). Nice work, great idea.
Dave Morrison Comment by: Dave Morrison - 2006-06-08 02:33
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Great.
Comment by: - 2006-06-08 02:31
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a lawyer? emotional state? human intimacy? in the same context? even if it is confidential thats pushing it... :)
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