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actively seeking paralysis
the antithesis to analysis
the cul-de-sac head
of an emotionally dead
cauterised soul seeking distance
not rewarded by persistence
you back away and dissemble
this does not resemble
a relationship of any sort
there is no likeness caught
anywhere: he seems without form
disparate as a particle storm
witnessed as a person in a certain phase
that disguises the fact it's an illogical maze
or rerouted questions, non sequiturs as answers
he evaporates and we lose any further chances
at gaining some kind of understanding
which is something we're always demanding
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he evaporates and we lose any further chances
at gaining some kind of understanding
which is something we're always demanding...don't know what it is about these lines, man. I'm drawn to reread them again and again. Really powerful and speaks volumes. Very nice.
