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Comment by: - 2006-07-16 03:09
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| Very hypnotic Suzanne,I like it. |
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| What an interesting idea -- a poem leading up to a birth. You writing is definite and striking. |
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| This is beautiful.I like the sway of the rhythm, a soothing lullaby to the many layers of messages in this piece. Great messsages. Keep writing. |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-06-14 14:15
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| Very different from other poems of yours I have read...almost graphic in the birth process, but I love the repitition of Rock a bye |
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This does lullaby he reader. You have done a great job at creating a cadence that allowed for the reader to get lost and gently released at the end. Great write.
Jodi |
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