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jagainst
Jay Halsey
United States, Colorado, Boulder

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Fashion Statement

Yeah sure'¦

I got skeletons
in my closet.

They hang in between
my favorite jeans
and button up work shirts.

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isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-10-03 20:56
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I try to keep my skeletons in the back of the closet, covered in dust. But thanks, that was a great piece to read. Short and to the point.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-28 16:08
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Skeleton in the closet, I think i have more of those then clothes, and I am a girl!! Everybody has a secret or 20. It is those skeletons we forget about that cause the most trouble. **
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-06-20 00:58
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tight and witty! love it
one suggestion (imo)
after
yeah sure...

skeletons?
I got em.

(then the closet is implied--JMO ;) great job, jay glad to see you haven't stopped posting--t
willowgroveben Comment by: willowgroveben - 2006-06-14 00:34
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Witty, my friend. You are extremely witty.
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-06-13 12:10
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Great stuff Jay
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