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| This is a very nice thought provoking piece. I really enjoyed the words and the way they flow. The story is nice and its a great way to put forth things people can actually relate to. |
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| Great poem. I smoke outside. It's a great place to think, as I'm puffing on the one thing that makes sense in life. Anyway, I dig the fact that it can be looked at in a variety of ways. Cool stuff Jodi! |
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| dd, it's not killing by smoking or a suicide...the person is dying from a disease. I love that it can be looked at about smoking and suicide...hits more readers |
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well i must be daft. i didn't even catch this was referring to killing yourself by smoking!
i thought the narrator was smoking while contemplating suicide.
either way, i still like it as is. |
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Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-12 15:05
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There is such judgement over smoking. I do not but I also feel that we dis-ease ourselves. If it is our karma to feel the issues of dis-ease we will butts or not.
Otherwise I loved your write. |
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