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love, lies, and implosions
'Do you want to explode?'¯
The words reverberate
R-e-s-o-n-a-t-e
From the body
to the soul,
On June 6, 1999
Promises of Love, recklessly offered.
And taken away -
no warning, no protection
Words'¦
like escapees from a prison;
unleashed onto the innocent.
Leaving behind
'¦rippling implosions.
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| The last 3 stanzas could stand alone for a strong poem. |
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| woa.. this poem like attacked me.. I like it |
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| it is great...we are left with "rippling implosions" that will be all we have... |
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| I like this.It's powerful without many words, your chouce of words was very powerful. Everyone has their own style....just keep them coming, Sasha. |
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| Its all good. |
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