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nicky T x
nicola turner
United Kingdom, birmingham

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The Dreams I Know

I look at you with ignorance
And see an angel there
Eyes so telescopic
Laced with loving care

You make my body tremble
You take me in so deep
I crave your satisfaction
Until I go to sleep

Then dreams of past and present
Merge inside my mind
And now I see an angel
Of a completely different kind

Part of me still hates you
For what you did to me
Broken hearts and shattered dreams
For the sake of misery

every time I think of it
it's like a knife inside my heart
A dagger in the dreams I know
I stop before I start

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barry edwards Comment by: barry edwards - 2006-06-13 02:04
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can totally relate to this...beautifully written, lots of great lines... especially loved the second stanza, sensual and well crafted.
look forward to more.
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