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till death do them part
How could
a woman love
a mans hands
used to destroy
not build ?
Long past
he laid
in his grave,
I think
she dreams,
of being
beaten
6/13/06
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| Wow..so little words, and yet, there is depth in each and every one of them. Powerful indeed. |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-07-25 16:38
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| Powerful, Jodi! Raw and vivid in emotion - as Bonnie wrote, there are many who live this life and this makes me wonder what happens when it stops. You gave me a chill on this hot summer night. Great work. |
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| This one leaves a big, red handprint on the brain. Punchy, honest, with a sad, powerful message. Really it's strength in little words. Really good, Jodi, really good. |
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| wow ... fabulous piece ... very brutal ... very honest ... |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-06-26 10:20
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| Much better now. Sad but true state of affairs for many and sadly some are still with their partners. |
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