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| ...your childish disguised as feminity...? |
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| I found this piece to be a very charming short write. Very unique descriptive terms like "Applesauce monster". This has a very charming peace about it. and it seems very honestly written from the narator's side. I love when short pieces can express simple yet explosive feelings and concepts like the connection and love between child and mother. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-25 19:46
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| This poem is very sweet. I agree with the Pandora about the phrase, 'applesauce monster.' I thought the last two lines gave this poem a lot of depth. |
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Comment by: skettio - 2006-06-24 05:21
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| The meaning is so well defined by your choices of words. Every word adds to the poem. Cute! |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-24 01:55
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| You have no problem at all in sharing the most treasured, most valuable aspects of your life. A simplistic form that works well for what you want to share and say, it is childlike in that it says what it must, it wants to tell all it can and it will do it quickly and sweetly, just like a child. |
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