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rmacklin
Robin Smith
United States, NC, Chapel Hill

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wasted lives

Time drips slowly from the desk
onto the carpet
another day lost.
These hands, resting on a mouse,
eyes staring, at nothing.
Wasted.
These hands, that should be
creating, saving, living, freeing,
anything but idling here
at this desk,
waiting for the clock to flip
to closing time
so that these hands can then
spend their time
wrapped around a glass,
a Camel Light,
a pen,
wasted, yet again.

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Comment by: - 2007-03-09 11:07
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Very nice, well constructed.
Comment by: - 2006-09-29 11:34
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I can relate to this, about everyday! lol. strong, open minded - though closed minded poem! intersting and good!
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-06-16 10:18
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V good write. Love the imagery of time dripping. The beginning put me in mind of me killing time on the internet on nights when I can't sleep. Nice one.
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