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shatsdreams
Elizabeth Berryhill
United States, Michigan, Rockford

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Another Place, Another Time

Another Place, Another Time

 

I drive down roads that my father before me drove down,

I try and picture in my mind what life was like back then,

An early morning kiss off to school

And Paw is off to work in the fields.

 

I close my eyes and I can see it happening

A lifetime ago when life was about family,

Sitting in front of the fireplace

With grand paw telling us all a story.

 

He speaks of houses which had no lights

There wasn't asphalt but dirt roads by moonlight

He tells us as he rubs his calloused hands

Of how the men and boys would till the lands.

 

They didn't have much money than

But you knew a friend was a friend

I want to go back to the time that was then

It was a simple life with simple men.

 

December 24, 2005

Elizabeth Berryhill-LaMonda

 


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Baxter Comment by: Baxter - 2006-07-10 12:17
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I LOVE THIS!
I spent a year on a farm during high school -I rememeber nights sitting around with the elders listening to stories and wondering what life was like back then.
Very well written!
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-21 17:02
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You do not know how much I wish time would roll back to when it was more simple. I really think I was born in the wrong era! It was not all about money and materail objects but about simplicity and happiness.--Very well put**
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