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Blissful Depression

We kiss like butterflies,
And shine like plastic.
We sing like glitter,
And stay like lipstick.

You`re outside my window,
Blowing your dreams in.
I`m seeing green skies,
And falling with a grin.

We`re sleepwalking outside,
With champagne in our hands.
Red roses in our hair,
We sing out our plans.

You lie down next to me,
Like a whispered secret.
Your eyes fall on me,
Like i`m your biggest regret.

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Comment by: - 2006-06-17 18:15
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Ahhh loved this. Great images and whimsy mixed with romance..totally didn't expect the "regret"...GREAT POEM! -Leah
barry edwards Comment by: barry edwards - 2006-06-17 17:55
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totally blown away and in awe of your stuff, really grabs my imagination in a way that a lot of the very ordinary writing i come across doesn't. that opening stanza is one of the most sublime pieces i've ever read. amazing... can't wait for more from you.
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