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audreymei
audrey mei
Germany, Berlin

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water

A mother
whose son
died this morning
is upstairs
in his bedroom
burying her face
in his clothes.

For her
I am water.

For her
I am a planet
of pure
ocean.

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crazybritt Comment by: crazybritt - 2007-10-13 12:55
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so much said with so few words. not to sound redundant, but very powerful piece!
Comment by: - 2007-04-10 17:51
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Absolutely sublime !!!!!!!
Comment by: - 2006-10-04 22:33
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this piece is strong and beautiful ( the ending is loving ). it's so emotional and sad. very good!!!

( bookmarked! )
Funkylele Comment by: Funkylele - 2006-07-11 07:41
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This piece is clean and clear and round like a circle. It is even siimpler than the evocation of an image, it conjures a sensation.
Beautifully done!
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2006-07-06 21:58
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A very beautiful poem in only 32 words. Exquisite!
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