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Comment by: - 2006-10-04 22:37
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| Oh! wow! and i like how you went from human to mother nature! very clever! this piece was sad yet strong... in both poem and the idea! good job! :) |
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Comment by: Bean - 2006-07-09 06:51
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| This is a moving and poignant poem. Well done. I agree with all the comments about making it longer. It feels like an excerpt from epic poem. |
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Thank you all for your comments.
Yes, more is coming!
This one is almost made to continue indefinitely... |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-07-06 22:23
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| A good start and a good end. I wish there was more. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-18 20:27
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| i liked the switch at the end. I would have liked to have some more stanzas before the end, but i think it's a good skeleton. |
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