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I'm everything and more
I'm awe inspiring
Electrifying
Worth much more than a passing glance
Second chance
Last dance
I made you tremble
Who do I resemble?
In your heart of hearts
Tell me
Pretend you don't remember
Screams still echo in my ears
Body tense
Back arched
Your scent all over me
You remember
You remember
I was the best in your bed
Worst stain on your linen
The fuck of your life
Nightmare to woman
Romeo back off
Take a backseat
I'm the new cock in town
Fuck the smile off a clown
Remember me
Remember me
I'm alone and I prey on the women who wander
No girl for myself
Families I plunder
No heart
No
Conscience
Lost myself in me
Please if you see me
Please
Please
Flee
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Love the 3rd stanza in particular, as well as the lines "I was the best in your bed / Worst stain on your linen" (and don't those 2 always seem to go hand-in-hand).
Excellent rhythm and erratic rhyme scheme. On my bookshelf.
Hi! In the seventh stanza is "woman" supposed to be "women"?
There is a good twist in the poem. At first I thought it was about a man bragging about his prowess and thought, okay here we go, another macho fantasy!!!! Then I got a surprise when the ego turned into a predator! GReat stuff!
I was a bit confused at the end with all the "please"s. I don't know how to read it. Does it mean that he is aware of the evil he is doing and his subconscious is begging women to stay clear of him, if so I think it is slightly out of cantor with the rest of the remorseless poem. Or, is he begging women to run becuase he loves the chase and the pounce?
