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The Intimate Mountaineer
they rise from the smooth expanse
a silken plane of creamy flesh
two mountainous hills
he can see them from down below
lost in the dark valley
unattainable?
perhaps
fording her river with a forked tongue
will cause a certain delay
in scaling those peaks
6/19/06
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Comment by: karjon - 2007-03-02 11:26
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Well, I was looking for entries in the Erotic challenge...
This is excellent - I love the teasing quality of the words. Nothing overt, nothing tacky, but quite, well, cheeky I suppose - leaving everything to the reader's imagination; they can see this whatever they want, the poet can maintaina wide-eyed innocence. Innuendo, done properly as it is here, can definitely be a turn on.
Cheers
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Comment by: Teri - 2007-02-07 21:04
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heh heh
Why, Manda, you tart, you. lol I love it! Fording her river with a forked tongue? *waggles eyebrows*
Great job, and it didn't make me blush for some reason. This is a good thing! :)
Teri xo |
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| This is a lovely sensual piece Manda. Very well crafted and I love the imagery of the 2 lovers in this. |
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Comment by: psgri2003 Online- 2006-06-25 19:51
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| :) great late night / early morning read. woke me up. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-25 00:57
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| ok i can see right through this one, dear! very clever which these are the best cause you can market them to the porn and childrens industries and get away with both! haha how big are those mountains? |
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