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"Flattered to be flattened
By your quivering frame."
This line totally made me shake. |
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| Why hadn't I commented on this before? I like the word choice here. It paints a nice pic, hopefully we've all felt at one time perhaps many times |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-07-26 01:36
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| simply stunning.... |
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Beautiful and almost flowery. this took alot from nature, it sort of brightens things up :)
This piece's theme was accented well by the natural imagery. The narators feelings came across well, it was a very smooth and enjoyable read :) |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-29 03:37
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| I like the way you focus on details. And of course your word choice is brilliant, "flattered to be flattened" or "peace in arms, passion in legs." :) |
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