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greensleaves
Siri Kaur
United States, South Carolina

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Things We Could Not Hide

Things We Could Not Hide

You slide yourself from me
(do you think I was too loud?)

Sheryl warns, walking into the room
that she is indeed walking into the room

a giant waste basket,
boxes full of books, dirty underwear, molding food hiding the floor,
she doesn't know where her feet go.

we've gotten used to sliming our way through junk,
she was once a housekeeper, I believe,
and every morning I woke-up
to her clinking noises in the kitchen,
cleaning up after us.
She found her way to the bed,
without falling,
and gave us an Easter present.
It will last us
one day,
one of us should get a job.
But for a few more days
I will sleep in an extra ten hours,
and recover from having her here,
guilty about how much
we really needed
that twenty dollars.

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-08-07 14:26
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I liked the last lines as well. As unexplained as they are they say so much. The fact that Sheryl is still coming around draws a good picture of her character. Good job.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-26 18:11
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I like the last lines about feeling guilty about the twenty dollars. Well read and smooth, also so real it is scary. **
MarieStarr Comment by: MarieStarr - 2006-06-23 16:10
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i like this line especially ... Sheryl warns, walking into the room/
that she is indeed walking into the room.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-06-21 19:34
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Such truth in this, in between jobs, fun while it lasts.
Thanks for sharing.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-06-21 12:25
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Beautiful write. Forlorn, wistful feel to these words. Thanks. x
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